Arz Kiya Hai

Aadha sher humne arz kiya hai,
Barabar ka hissa, mehfil se liya hai.

Friday, February 17, 2006

Aaj ye socha humne
Ki hum khuda se kya maange
Jab ye zindagi hi ek dua hai
Phir aur dua hum kya maange

6 Comments:

Blogger Anshul said...

wah wah :)

February 18, 2006 2:15 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

badiya!

February 18, 2006 3:45 AM  
Blogger educatedunemployed said...

WAH, WAH!

February 21, 2006 7:50 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I would rewrite the second one like the last one for balance and symmetry viz. put the 'hum' after 'khuda se'. Good one otherwise.

March 28, 2006 4:50 PM  
Blogger Inkblot said...

rather lovely

May 29, 2006 3:01 PM  
Blogger Unknown said...

what a shyaari.......... i like it

August 15, 2009 8:32 PM  

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