Aaj ye socha humne
Ki hum khuda se kya maange
Jab ye zindagi hi ek dua hai
Phir aur dua hum kya maange
Ki hum khuda se kya maange
Jab ye zindagi hi ek dua hai
Phir aur dua hum kya maange
Aadha sher humne arz kiya hai,
Barabar ka hissa, mehfil se liya hai.
6 Comments:
wah wah :)
badiya!
WAH, WAH!
I would rewrite the second one like the last one for balance and symmetry viz. put the 'hum' after 'khuda se'. Good one otherwise.
rather lovely
what a shyaari.......... i like it
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